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Reviews For: My Empty Future

VAMP'S
2008-08-18
ch 1,
i like it, update soon!
Koki Enwai
2008-07-15
ch 3,
...of Cassandra? That's just too awesome. I don't think I've ever read a story quite like this before. I love it!

So far, so good.

Please continue and keep up the fantastic work!

- Koki
AliceInNetherland
2008-07-07
ch 3,
wow i love it! up date soon.
Sally Can Wait
2008-06-28
ch 2,
Ahh!! Make the chapter longer! You'll get a lot more people hooked if you give them more to think about. Just a suggestion. :D

And before I totally didn't realize she was going to be a reincarnation of Cassandra. That is neat. o.o

Keep it up,
Sally :D
AliceInNetherland
2008-06-24
ch 2,
Wow that was amazing! update soon!
Sally Can Wait
2008-06-21
ch 1,
YES. I love the story of Cassandra. :D I am pumped for this.

My suggestion:

Take out, "Over the years I’ve heard a lot of people tell me this story in a number of different ways, but I still have yet to hear the real story, from someone else’s lips" and any other things speaking to the audience. Just go with the story.

:D Keep up the good work.

Sally
anne marie bristo
2008-06-21
ch 1,
i must ask did you come up with this plot all by yourself because it is wonderful
and i loved it.
Please update soon

xoxo
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