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| GriffinKnight77 2008-07-03 ch 2,  | abuseThis is a very interesting second chapter. It is far less grim than the first chapter and I found it enjoyable. You described Doreun leaving his mother very well and his brother was a surprise. I can only wonder what will happen next. |