Now I'm able to open my heart to you

the problem is.. You're gone, baby?

Ja, oft erkennt ma Dinge erst zu spät richtig. Wann vertont jemand deine ganzen songs?

Fairly sad yet presents a good point often forgotten by people. You don’t know what you have until it is gone. You don’t know that you care until it dies. You don’t know that you need it until it will never be yours. Truly heart felt. Good job

Oh, I really like your imagery! It's vivid.

Very relateable piece. I like the whole idea a lot. I especially like the ending.

Wow...this is very heartfelt and emotional. I love your style, it has a certain...mystique to it; like you're watching the scene unfold through a foggy window.

My favorite part:

"I grasped your hand desperately

You pushed me against the wall

A thousand pictures fell at my feet."

That passage was the most heartfelt, like you were begging, pleading desperately to him. I'm in awe at you're ability to convey such emotion in such few words.

In a nutshell: very impressive.

God Bless,

Frenchie-chan

awesome poem, i especially liked the way you depicted the rose petals.