Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search Login Register Extras
Reviews For: State Of Consciousness - Reviews: Page 1 of 14
person of little consequence 2009-11-24 . chapter 5
I love all of your stories. I thought I'd with that simple sentence. Update some time soon. PLEASE. short and sweet.

Polc
LeahDude 2009-11-22 . chapter 5
I love Johnny's character. And the plot idea is really good. And I can't wait to see...read, whatever, if you want to get all technical about it - more of Archer. Anyways. Really love it so far, and can't wait to read more (:
Random Story Stalker 2009-11-04 . chapter 5
Oh my this is so good, you should definately continue this and hopefully broken mirror too :)
big.break.and.laryngitis 2009-10-29 . chapter 5
Wait, really? There's only five... wah. This depresses me. You should post more just because I'm depressed.

What...? Okay, never mind, homework obviously fuddles my brain up so that my arguments sound... argumentative.

WAIT A MINUTE. You wrote Breaking The Mirror. I like, worship your soul. Or something. Like. Yeah. You should update just because I worship your soul or something and am depressed. The house smells like brownies and I am not allowed to eat any.

So yeah. That's my opinion. I'd like to see more :) Because it's sad, this whole idea is just sad :( But he's such a cutie, Johnny. I think he's absolutely adorable. And I'm sure I'll come to love Archer, if you make me. Which you will. When you update. Which you will. Because I worship your soul or something and am depressed and the house smells like brownies and I am not allowed to eat any.

Yes.
Very Strange Kuri 2009-10-21 . chapter 5
Interesting! I can't wait to see what happens next. Please update soon!
AshenCourt 2009-10-18 . chapter 5
P- word, ... it thought that was as in pussy cat. Am I right?
I liked the chapter though.
Please write more soon.
AshenCourt 2009-10-18 . chapter 4
Twelve year olds say the f* word?
Wow.
AshenCourt 2009-10-18 . chapter 3
Thought Harry Potter was 90s, probably 20 actually, I remember I fist came across it between 7 and 10.
Hmm, nice brother.
What was he doing in his room?
AshenCourt 2009-10-18 . chapter 2
'Kay, good start. Looking forward to the main bit soon.
Thanks.
AshenCourt 2009-10-18 . chapter 1
You've caught me, now I'll read on.
Li Nika 2009-10-17 . chapter 5
I love this story too. You really write these problem characters so well!
xxxtsubasaholic 2009-10-12 . chapter 5
Aww, it's been forever since you updated! Please work on this story some more... I really like it!
VoiceInsideYourHeadVIII 2009-10-03 . chapter 5
Another good story!
in-cloud-9 2009-10-01 . chapter 5
must update soon cause your groupies are waiting...
DarkDementedAngel 2009-09-08 . chapter 5
This story is so amazing and I like it. Got to say Jessica is my fav along with Johnny
Return to Top