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| kloun mannequin 2008-06-28 ch 1, | I can imagine the story in this, a person with nothing but someone who can be with and feel saved, it's a great poem. |
| half-sketched.staccatos 2008-06-22 ch 1, | konnichi wa Eh, it's all right. I like the style and the "This lonely bird cries/This lonely bird dies/This lonely bird flies." My favorte stanza was the first - beautiful. Ha det -Shan- |