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Reviews For: This Lonely Bird

kloun mannequin
2008-06-28
ch 1,
I can imagine the story in this, a person with nothing but someone who can be with and feel saved, it's a great poem.
half-sketched.staccatos
2008-06-22
ch 1,
konnichi wa

Eh, it's all right. I like the style and the "This lonely bird cries/This lonely bird dies/This lonely bird flies." My favorte stanza was the first - beautiful.

Ha det
-Shan-
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