oh my god...that is so sad...but very well written...good job!

"Remember me, I silently beg her. Remember yourself."
That was where the tears started rolling, and continued till the end of the story. This has to be one of the most moving stories I have ever read, you the best. You make me cry.
Hayley Elizabeth.

Beautiful.
Simply beautiful.

I tried to leave a substantial review, but I can't. That's all I can say.

so sad. wouderful tho...

So sad!

That's so sad!! Aww... I feel like crying. Anyways, gud job! :D

This was a very interesting story. I won't lie and say that amnesia is anything new to the fiction world, but I think it was unique how you told it from the point of view of someone close to the victim, instead of the victim herself.

You did a good job slowly introducing the characters and their pasts. You just worked it into the dialogue and narration naturally, instead of dumping it all in one place.

I also liked how you gave specific examples of things that she doesn't remember. It paints the picture better than just saying "she doesn't remember our past."

I don't have much concrit for this story; it was very nicely written. Towards the beginning, so jumped between scenes pretty quickly. One paragraph would be in one location, then suddenly the next would be in another. It only takes a sentence or two to tie them together, and it makes them flow much more smoothly. That's really the only thing that jumped out at me, though.

This was a very nice oneshot. I'm glad I came across it. Wonderful job!

Oh my gosh.
I am in the biggest cry-baby mood ever. I just watched P.S. I Love You, which is even sadder than this. But this... Well, this is emotional. It's good. Well written and all... There's... Something about it though. Something doesn't sit right... I'm not sure what it is though.
But this is good. I like it.
Love you.
KB