You've got a bunch of bright ideas, you know that? I must admit I love the story lines you create. You're very creative.
The ending though, it wasn't that brilliant really. It was nice and all, but it changed the whole story. It could've been a lot better. I mean, you could've kept the same idea, with the old man coming over and telling him he forgives him, but write it differently. You made it seem too soft, in comparison to the rest of the story, and I think the original style suited it better. And is it me or you wanted to finish it off quickly? Cause the ending seems a little bit sudden. You just added some considerations.
But I love it. The whole thing, it's really great!

Short, intense, dark drama full of bitterness and regret.

It said "A San Lorenzo story" does that mean more stories set in that universe?