|Reviews for You're like air I breathe|
| Scarlett Wynter 8/27/08 . chapter 1
The first 3 lines are downright awesome. Great poem!
| Iccle Fairy 7/2/08 . chapter 1
| Averybarbarian 7/2/08 . chapter 1
I've read other poems with the same thoughts but this one is different in a good way. You recognize the fact you cant literally breath them in but the person is dearly needed. Well done
| Twilight Starr 6/27/08 . chapter 1
Good piece. Nice work.
| simpleplan13 6/27/08 . chapter 1
The simile is nice and very relateable. I'm not sure why the first stanza is a question, but other than that I liked it a lot.
| PoetryQueen 6/24/08 . chapter 1
This poem is true. I love the first lines you have. I really liked them. God is always there, but we can't see him. It is so easy to believe that there is air, but so hard to believe that their is a God. I like how this poem somewhat covers blind faith without using the words blind faith. This poem comes from the heart. I really enjoyed it.
| brokencrystal7 6/23/08 . chapter 1
easy for me to relate to this. good poem
| aberlemno 6/23/08 . chapter 1
I like the repetition. It has quite a nice flow, but I particularly like the first three lines, they're a very good opening.
| fatbird33 6/22/08 . chapter 1
| Qzie 6/22/08 . chapter 1
Oh I rather like this. It's got this soothing feeling, even if a little bittersweet because of the speaker just wanting to be alone, even though they know they're not going to be alone. I'm not entirely sure if that came out right... wonderful poem. Chat later. -Qzie