That is really good. I see why you got second place. I am on the verge of tears right now! OMG! That great.

I liked this piece. It was overall a good story. Some of the diologue wasn't as crisp as it could be, and you switched from past to present tense quite often, but the content was good. :)
Faith

Aw, that's sad. He died and she died inside too. They seemed so in love. But am I curious why people were hunting her--and him for that matter.

In a few places, you kept switching tenses. Pretty much my only critique.