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| StarsWatchAsIDance 2008-10-27 ch 1,   | Jake and Lina are so cute!! I absolutely loved this story...great job!! :) |
| AbbeyEileen 2008-10-26 ch 1, | It was cute. I could have done without the movie talk, because it's a little much, but I love Jake. "You put tampons in my car?!" Uh, yeah. That's why there's a little blue box in there. Duh. lol |
| XxShatteringXSilencexX 2008-10-02 ch 1, | cute! |
| EnChAnTeD-KoReAn 2008-09-18 ch 1, | aw...quite cute! i loved it! i read another version of this SKoW challenge & this one seemed so much more original...especially the date part. i liked the fact that lina's date was not some ** prat. :) |
| SierralaineWalsh 2008-08-25 ch 1, | a cute classic. Ö |
| balloonfista 2008-08-22 ch 1, | Oh my God! I just love stories like this! To absolute bits and pieces from the innermost crevices of my heart. Sorry about the rambling. I love Jake and Lina! Ri |
| Annerire 2008-08-21 ch 1, | Aw, so cute...sorry, had a bit of an odd moment there! But yeah, I'm looking forward to more Jake/Lina stories. :) |
| blackbubbleblue 2008-08-17 ch 1, | I loved it and oh I was sent by pinkamoo(via her favs) |
| somuchformyhappyending 2008-08-15 ch 1, | cute. :) |
| ProphecyGirlSBN 2008-08-14 ch 1, | okay... great writing, funny, romantic, but i must say, the last sentence is veru unlikely... I don't think anyone could EVER be thankful for their periods, no matter what happened... but whatever happened, might just make it a little more bearable. |
| righthere431 2008-08-07 ch 1, | even my best friends wouldnt be able to tell if my "aunt from florida" is coming and theyre both girls! lol anyways... really cute story |
| paradiie 2008-07-15 ch 1, | this is really cute. it's simple and i really liked it. |
| mariakay 2008-07-11 ch 1, | This was very cute, makes me wish I had a best friend that took care of me like that. Jake for some reason remains to be a typical guy but at the same time he is very caring. I'd love to see these two characters again! |
| Pinkamoo 2008-07-08 ch 1, | You did that with no awkwardness, good one! I love the best friend, he's the right amount of everything! And I love the ending :p |
| notebaggage 2008-07-05 ch 1, | Squee! Extra-emely cute, my friend! Aw, I really, really, really like Jacob and Lina. Lina's so cute--I love how she acted around Derrick (when she found out he was still in love with waitress girl). SO GOOD. And Jacob... he's just hot, what can I say? So favouriting this! |