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| MagicWords 2008-10-27 ch 1,   | haha! Cute! What a great small story! Scared me at first but i knew to expect humor. |
| S. M. Saves 2008-06-24 ch 1, | Wow! I didn't see that coming. At first I thought it was a suicide scene and then it turned out to be an innocent ball pit. Whew! That was a nice twist. Just a little note: Don't underline all the lines. It's distracting and it makes it hard to read the lines underneath the already-underlined ones. That's my only critique. |