Amusing and nicely short. However, get rid of the underlining and for goodness *sake*, stop having your sentences run into each other! I've told you this before darling.

"Her brown hair and emerald eyes pierced the little girl."

Sorry, that just gave me the mental image of the girl being stabbed by the face. It's not good imagery to use. Or perhaps I'm just violent... eh.
See ya.

- Isilthrar

haha! Cute! What a great small story! Scared me at first but i knew to expect humor.

Wow! I didn't see that coming. At first I thought it was a suicide scene and then it turned out to be an innocent ball pit. Whew! That was a nice twist.

Just a little note: Don't underline all the lines. It's distracting and it makes it hard to read the lines underneath the already-underlined ones. That's my only critique.