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Reviews For: Prejudiced

MagicWords
2008-10-27
ch 1,
haha! Cute! What a great small story! Scared me at first but i knew to expect humor.
S. M. Saves
2008-06-24
ch 1,
Wow! I didn't see that coming. At first I thought it was a suicide scene and then it turned out to be an innocent ball pit. Whew! That was a nice twist.

Just a little note: Don't underline all the lines. It's distracting and it makes it hard to read the lines underneath the already-underlined ones. That's my only critique.
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