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| bold gravy 2008-08-26 ch 8, | abuseSimply incredible! Impossibly, it just keeps getting better! |
| Mursal 2008-08-26 ch 7, | abuseThey kiss. About damn time ( ; |
| AMM3485 2008-08-26 ch 8, | abuseIncredible chapter! I loved it. Yay! |
| pacific.babe 2008-08-26 ch 1, | abuseOHMYGAWD! i love your sebastian bear story(i discovered and read it in 2 DAYS!!. all my friends luv me for showing it to them lol), but i've always lurrvveed lucian boom. i am so happy he has a story!! keep up the good work!! |
| leila 2008-08-26 ch 8, anon. | abuseCan I just say... yummy pictures! XD (of lucian that is) James Franco is hubba hubba! Ezras' is perfect too. She's pretty and has that bubbly, fun, out-going type of look. Now I have faces to go by when reading this, thanks. Try to find ones for Lucy's brother too, I'm curious about him. |
| A Dark White Rose 2008-08-25 ch 8, | abuseyour story amazes me! dang!...let me borrow your imagination some time? lol j/k. i have to homeschool myself this year so blah i have to get up early and somehow teach myself latin. haha that will be great... and i envy you take lots a pictures in ireland and enjoy every second no matter what happens! thank you for updating so soon! i wish you luck on your writing! A Dark White Rose |
| Gilly Bean2 2008-08-24 ch 8, | abuseI love this story! Ezra and Lucian are wonderfully entertaining and multi-dimensional, as are the other characters. You have done a great job with the character development, and every chapter I read makes me feel more and more involved in the lives of your characters. The reactions are believable and often humorous, plus I am intrigued about what will happen with Lucian. It is agonizing waiting and I am totally rooting for Lucian and Ezra to get together, but I think that the tension that you are building up between them is simply delicious and I love it! The whole premise of this story and the last--Sebastian Bear--is wonderful. I love reading about this world, and the things that happen to the people in it. I wish that I had a bit more of an explanation about Ezra's childhood, because I am a litle confused: she lived with Sebastian and his family after her parent's died? I'd always wondered why she apparently lived alone in the last story. Poor Lucian's story just keeps getting darker and darker, doesn't it? He needs Ezra in his life to brighten things up. Curiosity is going to eat me alive about those attacks that he keeps having, and why they have slowed down recently. Anyway, I look forward to what you write next, and completely understand delays and school getting in the way of being able to just sit down and write. I wish you the best with your classes! On a different note: I love Dublin! I've been there several times (my step-dad is from Ireland), and I fall more in love every time! Let me make a few suggestions, and I'll try not to ramble too much! :) You have to try to take a day trip to Co. Wicklow--the ruins of St. Kevin's monestary and Glendalough are simply gorgeous! Must sees in Dublin include: the Book of Kels and the Library at Trinity College; the National Gallery; St. Patrick's and Christ Church Cathedrals; if you like Guiness, go to the brewery, but otherwise it is a bit of a waste (and 15 Euro); Phoenix Park is a great place to spend some time (it's home to lots of interesting things--I enjoy renting a bike there); St. Stephen's Green is another nice park in the city; be sure to check out the Temple Bar area, as well. For some history, the GPO on O'Connell Street is a nice stop, and there is some good shopping nearby, too. The Garden of Remembrance is nearby as well, which commemorates the 1916 Easter Rising with a haunting sculpture depicting the tale of the Children of Lir. Try drinking a Bulmers if you drink--it is a yummy hard cider. There are wonderful pubs in Dublin, and once those close down there are some wildly fun nightclubs (though you must be 20 to enter). Well, I see that I have managed to ramble quite nicely, huh? And I could go on forever! Cheers! -Gilly Bean |
| arreyn emme 2008-08-24 ch 8, | abuseIts a very different flavor from Sebastian Bear, but I love it so far! I love Lucian - poor tortured soul and all. |
| vocecara 2008-08-24 ch 8, | abuseI hate to say this (because my exams are in 35 days and I am FAR from prepared) but this story is terribly intriguing. Update soon! :D Oh and I read Breaking Dawn too. I don't know if it's just me, but I felt it was the worst book out of the four. Twilight was so much better; Breaking Dawn was kind of farfetched and out of character. what's happenening over at Eros? Surely someone would have missed them? Is anything else going to happen with Madeline and Seb? PS I LOVE SEB :D |
| Sun2Storm 2008-08-23 ch 8, | abuseUpdate you lazy bum(JK) IT's been three days! I'm going into shock |
| hairy-mushroom-nose 2008-08-23 ch 8, | abuseHey, sorry I haven't reviewed for the last few chapters! I have been away and just got back. I loved them as always but I'm so tired so I can't review. It's like 2am here. Wah. Yeah, I know. Excuses excuses. ANYWAYZ, Lucian is so adorable. I love how his eyes change colour. The mystery deepens too with the whole dreams and the lowlands dude. How interesting! I can't wait to see how the story goes, but Ezra amuses me with her engulfing bursts of lust. ha, Lucian must be v. good. ^.~ x |
| pheonixorion10 2008-08-22 ch 8, | abusegreat chapter update soon i live in dublin so i can tell you if you go to the right places it can be really fun go to the wrong ones and you will die of boredom |
| HazeleyedHoney 2008-08-22 ch 8, | abuseThose last seven chapters were really great, but now I'm sad 'cause I have no more to read for awhile. Now I'm not even sure which story I love more, this one, or SBIP. Comments/Questions: At first I thought that maybe it was Ezra affecting Lucian by making him a little happy and the darkness couldn't take it. But now I think it has something to do with what that hooded dude said before he kidnapped him. Especially when he mentioned his eyes. And now his eyes are turning black and stuff. I think its cool that Ezra can read his mind..I'm just wondering if maybe he'll be able to read hers? Can Ezra now dream of the future? It seems like maybe this "evil" is slowly taking over Lucian. Ugh! I hate it when I run out of chapters! lol And this one was so perfect. Especially the end when they were laying down and he put his arm around her waist and his head into her neck...::drools of future thoughts and what could happen between them:: I can't wait for an update and I only started this story today. What will I be like tomorrow? Plus, you said that you're getting really busy, so I'm guessing that it will take more than two days to update? lol |
| Jayjack 2008-08-21 ch 8, | abuseee yay update! woo. hmm interesting chapter. very strange he wants her but doesn't admit to it. and she already wants him and knows it yet didn't want him having the satisfaction yet now he does anyway.. update when possible deary. :D |
| Mursal 2008-08-21 ch 3, | abuseSomewhere new? As in a new world? As in, more scenes with my new favourite couple? teehee Its freakish how much the idea of the lowlands scares me. I really hope we don't see that side of your world for the rest of the story. |