I really like this story and I would love to see how they react living in kingdom.

please update! this is the story im most enthusiastic about being updated atm pleasy please x

uhhum. i think my brain just imploded from the sheer awesome of this. really, really lovely to read. i'm all jittery to see what happens next. :D

This story is awesome nothing like the crap I normally read :D:D please update soon I love it! x

I like the epic-ness of this story, and the tension that's laced throughout.

I was lured to your profile by "Ggangpae Love Affair", and I found this story to be among increasing evidence that you are a fantastic writer.

I was expecting a master/slave relationship to be much more hostile, but I like the subtle tension you use better. The fact that Sylan seems to be in over his head, paired with Altaeus's gentle acceptance of the situation makes for a beautiful, if not tense, relationship. I wish we could see more of Altaeus's thoughts concerning Sylan... does he like him at all? I'd imagine a consensual encounter between the two would explosive, but I'm also content to watch the buildup. If only Altaeus could derive a little more pleasure from Sylvan... something that would surprise and unbalance him even more.

The minor characters in this are strong enough to stand on their own, but Chanyiax and Rihyale seem to dominate. Chanyiax provides a welcome faithfulness after the bitterness of treason, and Rihyale's quietness somehow makes me really want to see him happy and in love.

I hope the ideas for this story keep flowing, because it's an absolute treat to read!

Hello, hello, hello

Another amazing chapter! wow I can't get enough of this! I truly. madly, deeply want the next chapter! *.*

The relationship is getting too ... em what is the right word? exciting? overwhelming? I don't know, I just know that this is one of the best fics that I have ever read (if only you update sooner! :P)

Sylan, Sylan , ... I never thought of him as a jealous type! O.o not really! but he is falling in love badly and he doesn't know it even! poor guy!

and Altaeus ... hm... lol it's both intriguing and sad ... the way he behave.

I really don't know how Sylan could get to Altaeus! if only he could give back Altaeus's dignity back, or maybe ...

That last part of story was great ... I mean I was as disappointed as Sylan! Ah... what a night it could have been?! do you think there would come a day that Altaeus willingly be with Sylan?! I just can't wait and see! oh please have mercy and update soon ... I'm gonna die ... :(

ohh ... I just saw your drawings! gush you are something! I mean I draw myself and you work is great! You should have become a mangaka!

BTW, have you read the Viewfinder series manga? by Yamane sensei? if not, you should! I can grantee that you will enjoy the art and story both! ;)

ops ... I talk too much again! :P

Thank you and please upsate soon! ^_^

Ouch, that's gotta hurt his pride. Awaiting your next installement and keep up with the great work.
-lpluver

Aw, come one! Sex is never too much in a good story. As they say: as long as there's a plot developing between sex scenes, it's not pointless. =P
Which, of course, is not exactly your case, since I find this story quite interesting.
I specially like the way the characters react and act. They seem quite real to me.
I'd like to know more about Sylan... but I guess that'll take time.

Anyway, keep up the good job and, for the gods' mercy, update soon!

Sweet moons!

Great!
I'm hooked on the first chapter, that has to be a new thing.
I'm off to read the second one.

Cheers!

lol
Liking it.
PLease continue, I LOVE the new character~!1 The emporor's going to get jealous... lol
lee

ha ha ha I can't stop smiling X) A new chapter is finally up yay!!

Hello hello,

Thanks for the update but honestly I had forgotten everything , I read the past chapters first to refresh my mind and then read the new chapter! which was pretty nice and I was waiting to see what's gonna happen!

Then scene between the king and the emperor was really great, the conversation the same too! :D I really enjoy reading that part.

But I was wondering what kind of a slave the king is?! He is free to roam around his castle and ... em ... the emperor didn't ask for anything especial really! I was wondering , thinking maybe hoping for something more ... lol

Anyway the part the emperor tend to king's injuries was pretty nice! I loved it the most! ^^

Well, just update soon please! u.u

thank you ;)

i loved it
this story is so good
and you write so well

this story is written soo well and is simply enthralling
i hope you write more