|Reviews for Winter Dies|
| atalantea 6/27/08 . chapter 1
I like it that even if you're talking about spring it seems so dark and painful. Go imagery. :D And no, I won't tell you to fix the rhythm. I think it's fine.
Anyway, keep writing. :D
| Dolvich 6/26/08 . chapter 1
My Atomic Garden-
The only thing I have is in the fourth line, I think that's the wrong weather. Small thing, but noticeable.
Other than that, very good imagery. I like it.