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Reviews For: Stuff About You That I Can't Forget
BurningEmbers 2008-06-23 . chapter 1
it is the small things that remind us of someone we miss. The first part made me laugh, and by the end i wanted to cry. Nice Work!
Averybarbarian 2008-06-23 . chapter 1
Aw sadness… Remembering someone even though they are gone and desire you no longer… Though it is the good memories that stay with someone and make life worthwhile and the bad ones that tend to teach us something that is worth learning. Overall Great poem! I enjoyed reading it, it was very well written. Have you ever heard the song Memories by Within Temptation? It’s a really good song and I think you would like it; it’s fairly similar to your poem. Anyway great poem I enjoyed reading it. Keep writing!
gg. lass 2008-06-23 . chapter 1
this is beautiful.
the rhyming is so easy and fluent and...just...amazing.

yours until the wind changes,
gg
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