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Reviews For: My Yellow Brick Road is a Red Carpet of Mould
MidnightFlight 2008-07-08 . chapter 1
wow this is so sad and a bit funny at the same time. but mostly sad. and all amazing!
taurtica 2008-06-23 . chapter 1
SO FUNNYY.
wow. this is definitely one of the most creative stories i've ever read, i was laughing like a maniac through the whole thing.
Tranquil Thorns 2008-06-23 . chapter 1
This is such a creative story! =)

I love the fact that though you focused on Rumpelstiltskin, you still managed to throw in references to other fairy tales, and in very funny ways too. I laughed at the TV report, and was very amused by the goings-on of the FairyTale Land. =P

Also, I like your choice of character. I probably wouldn't have been able to pull off a 'Rumpelstiltskin story', and I like the way you develop him here.

An amusing and enjoyable read, all in all.
NeonGolden 2008-06-23 . chapter 1
I did this exact same coursework last year - I did a sci-fi futuristic Snow White and got an A for it, and it was very much a lot of jokes like this one. I think yours should get an A as well! I really thought it was funny =] good luck!
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