I havent thought of that, nice Jemy. Dave is out of charac here. lol. a little. But in general, your people are cool. We need more LawXVin moment.

oh finally you updated it! Well it is about time. Nice ch.

Can I have some of the pictures hehe. Jeremiah is so smart, evilly smart. Oh Merry-Go-Around sounds funny

more please, not another months right (heart)

Jia-sempai! D

You have a really nice plot and characters, kinda really like Jeremiah . *squeals*

But your spelling mistakes make a poor little sec4 sad...

Since Leah is a lazy kid (she just happened to tell me that you write on fiction press today *evil grin*), I want to help beta-read/correct this beautiful little slash story.

I am going to glomp you tomorrow at 3rivieres if i see you, so expect a short yaoi obsessed kid to attack you. )

Joanna

Hey I'm reviewing anyway, you know Im gonna talk to you about it at school, we can correct it together

hey great chapter ( i think you know who I am) YOUR LOVER muwhahahahahahha, just kinding, see you at school tomorrow

haha I soo see it (just read the begginning)the woman with the baby:

"Where's the chief you peadophilic asshole!" Throws baby at the priest

holly crap, he kills for like no reason. great story but a few mistakes, maybe you could get someone to correct that, but other than that, you have a good writting style and an amazing and dark imagination...dude I bet you're a hot asian chick from Malaysia or soemthing right.

You haven't upload for a month already! I reread and man, I just love the drama and mystery. It is so freaking twisted the whole thing, full of unexpected stuffies.

Remember to upload soon! I, no we, are waiting.

omg, I haven't told you, but i LOVE this story. IT's just so twisted, lol. And I LOVE twisted things :D

I can't wait for more, I REALLY hope that there will be more...

the preview sounds so cool. “As for you, young Jeremiah, you smelled quite of coffee. Is it the new fashion perfume? But I thought pretty girls these days prefer cologne, you know.” love (heart) Vincent is fighting Jeremiah over small stuff is just cute. Reoure eats burnt food? She is going to die man!

more plz

good

finally update you! A toilet mourner now it is funny. Jeremiah should just grab that Law and kissed him already I cant wait for that moment kya *fangirl squeals*

Okay, my brain stopped its total shut down, so I've FINALLY got to review chapter... Wherever I'm at! Okay, I'm just about to start... EXCITED! JEREMIAH, MY SMEXY PSYCHOPATH, I DID NOT FORGET YOU! DO NOT DESPAIR, MY LOVE! I'M COMING FOR YOU! Ahem... So let's get started!

Shit... Can't find... What was your name again?

Oh, that explains it... I was searching on the wrong website. Stupid Lyla!

Okay, I was smart and added the page to my favourites so I never lose it again! :)

Wait a second... What's all this about a tale of woe? Anyways, will meandre down there after. So here we go for review of chapter 6!

his pretty angel ; GET A LIFE, DUDE!

We know you are hiding something; YES, I EAT BABIES, MWAHAHAHAHA! *hem* Moving on...

humans often refused to listen to any logic said except those they had in their mind; I know the feeling... Except its a permanent state of being for me!

See, this is my husband; AW! Wait... Little kid married to psychopathic mushy-mush romantic... Weird... BUT EVEN MORE CUTE!

Mardelyn; Where do you get these names?

making Jeremiah to laugh softly; ... All right, back off little girl, from this point on, HE'S MINE!

She will be married one day to a rich boy with high education; Sorry hon, he's mine too... I think I'm creating a harem here!

Mardelyn shines through out the lands; O.O

deep inside; a crimson black flame was building up. How he wanted to shoot the lady dead for saying such narrow minded affair.; Okay, screw the rich dude and the harem. I'll settle for Jeremiah!

“What a pompous man!” ; LOLS!

Salem witch hunt; Oh my god, I was just thinking of that!

am so suicidal; "Not to mention cute and rather humorous..."

I apologize for my offensive action; Darling, you can be as offensive as you like with me!

It is alright, I don’t expect anyone to understand how my mind works; MISUNDERSTOOD AS WELL! GET THE FANGIRL BRIGADE, WE'RE GOING IN!

completely immune to his charm.; What is he, a eunich?

something about the Vaccuumers; AND THEIR ARCH-NEMESIS, THE SWIFFERS! (No, I will not let it go!)

I am not the stalker type unlike somebody in front of me; LOLs! OH burn!

“I hate you.” ; It's shameless how they flirt!

That's it! Too late for me to read any more chapters, and I'm busy shopping tomorrow - maybe tomorrow evening... Can't wait! The next one sound super important and cool! WHE!

Okay, that's all, ciao ciao!

BTW what happened to our sweet jeremiah. In chapter one he was a sexy bad ** dude, and then he's just a scary psyco killer in the closet?

Hello! Extra chapter, can I hear a whoop?

WHOOP!

OMG who is this vincent character in the way of Jeremiah? EH? he better be straight!