This is truly a stunning story.

xx
Ali

I decided to reread the story after so long and oh my god. I cried so many times!

How sweet

aw i loved it, but i have to say wth i love jace. he's a meanie but can you blame him. he is a mutant type thing lol

I loved this story! Really, very creatively written and I loved how you made each character so complex and deep. I loved how Jace had two sides in him and it was kinda the same with Angela. I can't wait to read your other stories! Keep writing!

omg.i loved this story .i first read it on quizilla bout 2 months ago ( one of the best storys iv read on there) and yay i found u on here! u have some talent girl.

wow, excellent story. so i assume this is a prequel of sorts to raised by wolves (which is also awesome) and i am wondering if you plan on putting in a sequel to this that comes before raised by wolves. i would love to see angela's life after and how she ends up returning to jace. great job and keep writing!!

Will there be a sequel?

This was a great story!!
You really did a great job with it.
But when is the sequal??
-Delfemia-Chan994

Oh my god! When Jace put the leash on her collar i got so mad. :P
And she said that it was at least better than a broken finger, well give me a broken finger anytime! Shees.. i would have strangled him with the cord! :P
The story is becoming more interresting by the minute!! :P

Wow, Angela sure does pass out a lot, but considering the fact that 'Jace' is always beating the crap out of her or... something else, it doesn't surprise me.
Okey, i am really not trying to be rude... not at all, this is not a flame, i just want to be honest.
I read your other story first (with Laela) and i LOVE that one, so i really can't wait for the next chapter :P
but then i decided to read this one and i was somewhat dissapointed, i really don't like this POV... i never really did, i can't really concentrate on the story when it says you/I all the time.. but that's just my personal opinion.. however the story does get better with every chapter, i don't know if it's just because i needed to get used to this pov or not.. but still, i like the story.. just not the pov.. and on the other story, i love it.. (so i know that this story was your first one and if i compare it with the other one (since that was the one i read firts) then i have to say that you have deffinitely improved!! so good job.. :D
I hope you don't get mad at me for giving you my opinion.. that's what we're on fictionpress for right?
but you're a good author so :D
okey byes..

Oh btw, I'm adding it to my favorites.
See you *

Hello. I loved Slave to a Monster! I first read it on quizilla and I thought it was the most interesting story I ever read there!
Congrats! You are a very talented writer!

This was a good story. I liked it. I have a few comments. One, you wrote second person really well. I didn't even notice it at first. Two, she seems to have spent most of the story passing out. Um, yeah, actually, that's it. I'm going to check to see if there's a sequel. If there isn't, you should maybe write one, if you want. Maybe not. I don't know.

Hey I loved this story to death..lol. I was thinking that maybe it would be kool if you wrote another one like this. well, more like a slave to a monster 2.. or something to that affect.. anyways keep up the awsome writing and I can not wait to read more stories of yours..