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| crimson-reverie 2008-07-09 ch 1, | wow. i'm actually crying! that's really good. its sad though |
| WiccanGypsy 2008-06-24 ch 1, | I can so relate to this. Isn't it funny how the people who are supposed to know you best, don't actually know the real you? Awesome poem. |
| Tiernan Hunter 2008-06-23 ch 1, | I can totally agree with this. Parents are almost always to blame for how screwed up their kid ends up being. |
| ayarianna 2008-06-23 ch 1, | this gave me chills. i love it so much. im adding you to my author alert list... you are freakin awesome |
| another regret 2008-06-23 ch 1, | I really like it. It flows well and how the narrator doesn't seem angry at the friends and family, just that they should realize that it's all their fault. I really love the parts about the knife and how you simply said "covered in red". It's so simple it leaves a lot to imagination. Great job. |