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Reviews For: It's Your Fault

crimson-reverie
2008-07-09
ch 1,
wow. i'm actually crying! that's really good. its sad though
WiccanGypsy
2008-06-24
ch 1,
I can so relate to this. Isn't it funny how the people who are supposed to know you best, don't actually know the real you?

Awesome poem.
Tiernan Hunter
2008-06-23
ch 1,
I can totally agree with this. Parents are almost always to blame for how screwed up their kid ends up being.
ayarianna
2008-06-23
ch 1,
this gave me chills.
i love it so much.
im adding you to my author alert list... you are freakin awesome
another regret
2008-06-23
ch 1,
I really like it. It flows well and how the narrator doesn't seem angry at the friends and family, just that they should realize that it's all their fault. I really love the parts about the knife and how you simply said "covered in red". It's so simple it leaves a lot to imagination. Great job.
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