de.press.ing.
but lovely.

it's heartbroken, but I think the last stanza is a bit hopeful since you don't want it anymore.

great work.

i love this poem! its totaly my style! i like the sadness in it...cuz i kinda like depressing stuff...um yeah...
i liked the rhyming a lot...rhyming helps me read poems easier...
i liked the ending a lot too!
good poem!

And here I thought I was the only good poet I knew! Good job. Sad, but really well-written.

very morbid-grabs attention though...keeps this reader thinking about it

oh my... this is sad. but really beautiful. i always did love your poetry. it's awesome.