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| Roley-poley 2008-06-30 ch 1,   | That was...interesting I like the way the verses are done and the sudden end |
| miscellanea 2008-06-29 ch 1, | This poem really started to annoy me until I reached the end and it was hillarious. :-) |
| Silver Night 2008-06-24 ch 1, | This is nice. But to think of steam rising towards the sky as flying...is a bit weird... But other than that, I like the repetition of "Why can't I fly?" in the first 5 stanzas. I like the ending, too =P |