 Hope.flies 2008-08-28 . chapter 14Okay, absolutly AMAZING! The entire series was gripping, you knew every single one of your characters and you know how to make a compelling story. You really can write.
I found very limited mistakes in your entire series, which is totally awesome. Pretty much all of your characters are round, meaning you see every side of them. Absolutly wonderful.
I think, just like with every story, you could use with having a beta who has no idea what they're reading (such as myself) to get the mechanics stuff, though I'm not good at grammer. Over all, this story is absolutly amazing I honestly cannot wait to read your other stuff! I'm so glad that you made me start reading!
Oh, and you ending was absolutly amazing.
"My name is Katie Billing and I had been going to Edmund’s school for gifted and talented children since I was four. That was my story. This is my happily ever after."
and amazing way to end your series! Positively wonderful job writing and I hope your writing is just as good in your other things! |
 Hope.flies 2008-08-23 . chapter 10such an addicting story... |
 Hope.flies 2008-08-23 . chapter 9Okay you seriously are an evil evil person! UGH my uncle HAS to come over now...Wait...no its me mom...Thank goodness...
UGH I HATE YOU! |
 Hope.flies 2008-08-23 . chapter 8Okay, now you kill off Alex?!?!?! WTH?!?!?!?!?!
Ugh the band Panic! at the Disco has seriously changed...it's kinda annoying to listen to...:(:(:( I like there first CD a heck of a lot better than there new one...
ANYWAYS -must- -keep- -reading- |
 Hope.flies 2008-08-23 . chapter 7OMG LIAM IS A _ (fill in the blank with the evilest, worst thing EVER!)!
-cries some more- -tries to hide tears so my dad doesn't freak out- -fails miserably- -hides behind computer- |
 Hope.flies 2008-08-23 . chapter 6Ack...-cries- evil person...-gets stakes ready for when you return to england- |
 Hope.flies 2008-08-23 . chapter 5Eek!! Why must Aimee be the only true survivor?!?!?!?! Liam might as well be dead for all he's doing!! Agh this is painful...*continues reading next chapter* |
 Hope.flies 2008-08-23 . chapter 4okay, cool chapter! Really makes me want to read the next chapter, but i need to take a shower before my cousins get here.
Hows your trip so far?? Must be fun in Florida!! And guess what? Yesterday AND today it's been sunny in Massachusettes (just above NYC).
Okay, Great job and I hope you've continued writting so awesomely!! |
 Hope.flies 2008-08-22 . chapter 3okay...addicting...and...confusing...ish...more like the past...
Was the last fight the fifth time Aimeetried to save her friends? Or was it the first? Or...or...i don't know...
And as for Sally and Alex...well...Sally seems...i don't know...like a little twelve year old that knows nothing of the real world. Nothing at all. No, a smart alec eight year old (such as, oh i don't know, my sister!), But I can see a seventeen year old being the same way...
So yeah...I'd read the next chapter (as much as i want to) but i really need to help my brother take his pictures down and put them in the playroom while we wait for my moms family to come over, whne I'll see them for the third time i can remember. We're gonna be working on a collage for my memere (great grandmother) who passed away very early monday morning. I saw her, maybe four times (twice when she was in Hospice Home, a hospital for the dying thats homey so family will visit).
So yeah...Oh, and my uncle and cousins from my dads side will be visiting tomorrow morning and a friend is coming over tomorrow after noon.
Hey, i got my school letter in today and i go back to school on the third!! Only two weeks until i see all of my friends! Yay! And my woodtech teacher is someone i had in seventh grade!! It was totally awesome! Okay...well...going now...Ooh!! Dinner...yumm... |
 Freddy Teddy 2008-07-27 . chapter 14I SWEAR! IM YOUR NUMER 1 BIGGEST FAN NOW! You need to get that book published! REALLY! IF THERE IS ANY WAY I CAN HELP, TELL ME! THAT BOOK WAS BETTER THAN MOST I'VE BOUGHT IN THE BOOK STORE! ANYTHING, AND I'LL HELP THE BEST I CAN! |
 Freddy Teddy 2008-07-27 . chapter 8THEY HAVE TO COME BACK!THEY JUST HAVE TO! ALL OF THEM! |