I like this story as well. I do think you should continue this. If not here, then definitely by adding more to your first story. Like I have mentioned in my review for your first story, I really want to know how they resolve the whole alien issue. Your sci-fi is written very well because it is so believable.

it's like been a month and u only updated one chap? lol. it's no biggy-i'm liking the story plot tho. I haven't updated either, but keep up the goodwork

Love it! I wanna see what happens SO bad!

it took long for this chap. but i don't blame you. I have AP homework over summer school and it's sucks. I don't even have time to write the stories I want to.

Mainly I have like three other stories i realli want to read.

but keep up with school work and writing.

... :D

yo biggy man... stories great... the other ones... no comment
jux waned to ask you to play Bball... haha... so... continue writing and someday mayb youll get it... (the prophecy shall be fulfilled!) haha... keep trying lil' buddy... well, big buddy... and you better show me that ankle breaker after my hand gets better... by the way i got some story suggestions. maybe like a ** with his friend, a boy, could suddenly have homosexual feelings for each other... haha

Hey! I just wanted to let you know that I never do this, (the review/comment thingy) but I thought I should let you know that I really enjoy your writing. I've read a lot of young writers' stories and I have to say that yours struck me as one of the best! I think that you are really talented and I hope you keep up the awesome work!

yeah a sequel!

i can't wait to read the rest so keep writing!

Great story so far.

Cool chapter. Glad to see you kept writing the story :). I'm kinda shocked your a guy. Update soon. Make Ren and Claire a couple :D

Bonjour,
Guess what!! I'm way excited that you are making a sequel whats-it to your Secret Loves story. It is rather marvelous and groovy. And also, I must thank you for not letting Ren go with Angeline. I would have had to hurt you. Haha, no just kidding, I'm not a violent person. I would just send you a very scathing review. Teehee, but no worries I think that whole fandango has been cleared up. So you have nothing to fear, I guess. Lucky you. Haha just kidding, again. Sorry I'm kind of a spaz. So I'm gonna go now, hopefully not leaving you TOO scarred. But keep up the good work!

~Moi.


P.S. In case you are not educated on the whole Frog-Legs-A-Gogo Land (FRANCE!) speech, bonjour means hello. If it helps just imagine to French blokes walking down a street, clutching crouissants (I don't care if thats not how you spell) and wearing berets. They walk by each other in all casualosity and say Bonjour! And then commence to talking about art or some other fancy French thing. (haha I love alliteration)


P.S.S or is it P.P.S? (I will never know) Moi means Me. But it is much more full of sophisticosity. Which is not really a word, but it fits right? And don't make me go on to make another illustration of when moi is used in France. I am done riffling through my creative knick-knacks for now. (oo-er) Cheerio!