hardening you heart never solves anything I've done it it does work for a short time but in the end you get hit harder by everything. Your writing is very good. in life and love your heart will be hurt but in the end you'll live your life and at the end of the road if you've lived your life for all it's worth you'll see joy when you look back. don't harden you heart, it doesn't work

I like how you set it up with all those questions & how that last line ties into those. really nice job. All your descriptions are nice as well.

This has an incredible depth. Great job.

Very well written, despite the few errors with a few extra words and such, but the feeling of the whole piece more then makes up for it.

Keep it up.

Thanks for reviewing.

Wow I can’t even begin to say how great this poem is! You blended the words beautifully to paint the feelings in the minds and the emotions of your readers. One can feel the longing desires that are placed within this piece. The wanting to be with someone though they are in every way perfect. Wow wonderfully written! Keep writing )