   Cold Fingers 2009-01-01 . chapter 5this is easily one of my favorite stories on fictionpress, and it is a true joy to read. you made the diamond lara, i just cut and polished it a little.
love lindsay |
 Keelin 2008-12-31 . chapter 5Very interesting! The first chapter really had me absorbed and from there my curiosity kept growing. Lena is a well written character whose life is very intriguing. I can’t wait to find out who this shaggy haired boy is. Hope you update soon! |
 slash.obsessed.fangirl-42 2008-09-14 . chapter 4interesting. the more i read, the more questions i have, which, i suppose, is how it should be...
--kyra |
 Maplewing 2008-08-22 . chapter 4Yay, sweet chapter! I like how in the beginning she gets floor 13 and there's thunder. It would be cliche, but the way you write it makes it seem original, which is good. :)
...Dang. I gotta go. But I loved this chapter. Update soon. |
 Kat The Great 2008-07-23 . chapter 3i love how your story is going. keep up the amazing job. you have a great talent. |
 Not-so-Innocent-51 2008-06-30 . chapter 3This is a really good story. Now the whole thing makes sense to me. So the prologue tells us what is going to happen eventually in the story write? I want more chapters. Keep it up Madame Writer |
| Maplewing 2008-06-30 . chapter 3 Here's another box of conversation hearts... ^^
This chapter was even better than th others! It was so, I don't know... sad? But touching? I loved the memory about the apple tree, and how she puts up the pictures of her father and draws with colors again. AWESOME job! :) |
| slash.obsessed.fangirl-42 2008-06-29 . chapter 3 lifetime of servitude? sounds good. my first order: write more story! this is amazing! i love the vivid picture you paint, and the supernatural aspect is great. you deserve every conversation heart you get. thanks for another wonderful chapter.
--kyra |
 Atypicallyodd 2008-06-27 . chapter 1Nice. I like it. Keep this one going! Smiles234 |
| Kat The Great 2008-06-25 . chapter 2 The story so far is really good. Keep up the updates.
Peace Love and Happiness
Kat The Great |
 FYI Im off topic. 2008-06-24 . chapter 2ooh. keep writing! |
 Mickale B. 2008-06-24 . chapter 2 A nice start to what I'm sure will be number one on the site! |
 RaindropShingles 2008-06-24 . chapter 1Intriguing... |
| Maplewing 2008-06-24 . chapter 2 Awesome chapter! I'm glad she didn't kill herself because then what kind of story would that be? xD So, who was the boy? I need to know! Too much suspense! lol, please update soon! |
| Cold Fingers 2008-06-24 . chapter 2 o, what happens next? oh that's right! i already know! because i'm your editor. hahaha |
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