YOUR STORY WAS INTERESTING.BUT I DONT GET IT.DO THE BROTHERS GO TOGETHER?YOUR SPELLING SORT OF NEEDS INPROVEMENT.BUT OTHERWISE,IT WAS GOOD. GOOD JOB

I really like your writing style. You've got really interesting ideas and very unique characters. Your story line sounds very creative and it must be a one-of-a-kind idea!

I'm still jealous that you can write so much better than I can!

Happy writing!