|Reviews for breath is the key|
| moon-behind-dark-clouds 6/25/08 . chapter 1
so simple and so beautiful!
| Faith Adeline 6/24/08 . chapter 1
I like how simple this is, yet how much it says. And, it's real. I've often found myself doing the same thing.
Good work :)
| Isca 6/24/08 . chapter 1
Wow. Incredible imagery. It's simple, but powerful! :)
| it's not your fault 6/24/08 . chapter 1
you beat me to it - i did the same thing earlier today, and planned to write about it.
| Imperia 6/24/08 . chapter 1
dramatic, yes but still good. any plans on extending it?