oh
my
gawd.

i LOVE it!.
perfection.
"so far she can only break her own"

love the movie, love the poem.
holycrap, favorite!

My favourite lines: 'something's gotta break the bell jar that begged:/ drink me, my love'. I love language used in this poem; it's very abstract, very obscure, but that is what makes it so intriguing. I can't help but feel that it is slightly unoriginal - I mean the sort of angsty ideas behind it, not the way you've dressed them - and the use of images such as 'black', 'matchstick fingers', 'gun', 'tattoos', 'suicide', 'blood' and hearts sort of back this up. I like your writing a lot, but I don't know whether you were intending the poem to feel sort of teenage-angsty or whether that's just what happened, and whether you like it like that or not. Interesting reading, none the less.

Gorgeous and dark. And very descriptive! I love the imagery in this. Vivid, intense. Wow. Seriously, this was breathtaking. I could also see it being sung..

shit, i love eternal sunshine. is it just me or is alice in wonderland subtly weaved into this? :) i love that too. shitshitshit. ok i really have nothing to say, this is brilliance in black scribbles. love it.

I love this. It is really haunting.

"to be suicide royalty and a permanent
sort of ache in his heart."

Excellent line.

tattoos, she said, come in two flavors: ink and scars. there’s blood either way. and always a story.

well there is just 2 authors that i actually love every single piece one was "bleed away from your rejection" i cant find him...anyways...girl i can only say that u r pretty good...awesome...just wow...u let me speachless. what can i say.

this world is in state of agony

i'm quite mindfucked right now, so this isn't going to sound.. anything like it should.

i want i want i want.
we live on lines and borrowed ideas,
hoping we'll find the right combination for our story,
hoping someone else will.

this was amazing.

very good piece, I really liked it. Great job.
Faith

konban wa

Mm, stunning. Loved the allusion to Alice and Wonderland. :) Always a fan of that book.

Ha det
-Shan-

this is beautiful.

yours until the wind changes,
gg