Hey Dearheart, what's up! Wow, this is an amazing poem and so true. There are few things that human life needs more than imagination. I love the refraining lines about being young or old enough. The childlike tone perfectly matched the story's content. I have no criticism whatsoever. Will read more of your work later. Bye and have a nice day!!

AW! That is such a sweet poem, and you are so incredibly talented, my dear DH.

"When you are young enough..."... what a touching line. Love this poem, Dearie. :) *Snugs*

I'm happy and sad at the same time now. I don't want to grow up now; maybe I just need to grow down some. Does that make sense? I'm thinking of the "When you're young enough" line.
If I'm not talking straight it's because words are somewhat beyond me. Great poem!

Oh my gosh! Each new thing I read that you write, just reassures me more and more how incredibly talented you are. It's amazing! I love this poem though it's really, really great.
Shealtiel