I love this. I don't think that there is a single flaw in your writing... as usual. I really like the poetry that you do, it has deep feeling and you can tell that it came from the heart. My favorite part was when you wrote of the blurring keyboard, it put a more vivid picture in my mind. I hope that you keep writing more with this kind of feeling.

That was a fantastic read although I can across this sentence “You were going some problems.” It was a little confusing because you forgot the word through. The raw emotion was very much felt as I read over it. This poem reminded me of a situation my one gay friend told me about way before I meet him. I really like the way the poem is all spread out and the way the lines wave. It helped to express the emotion of this poem.

Selverwulf
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Wow, that was sad.

"You said you were an introvert
But that still isn’t an excuse
For abandoning your friends."

Beautiful, and true.

There's an underlying tone of frustration beneath all these words, and I assume it's because you didn't get a real answer for your friend's leaving (does that make any sense? Is that sentence constructed correctly?). I suggest you to fix this sentence: "You were going some problems." (I think it's missing 'through'). Overall, good job.

I am not the best reviewer of poetry (as I dont read it much) but the message in this is clear. the frustration and confusion is heartfelt. I noticed a typo in "you were going some problems." which I think should be "you were going through some problems."
Being an introvert doesnt excuse abandoning your friends. I am called an introvert sometimes mostly because i prefer being either one on one with my friend or in a small group of 3-4.

O... That's sad... It does make you wonder, though.

This was a very powerful piece. As usual, your poems continue to improve and amaze me.

I'm sorry you write such ** poetry that your girlfriends keep leaving you all the time. :(

>< aw. so sad. well she's not worth it if she doesn't even come on to at least say good bye.

I really like your poem. It was well written and you do have some good points. ~sigh~ The sadness of loosing a close friend. Anyway good job keep writing =)

I like how it has the questions at the beginning and then ends with one too. The way you ended it is also a really strong ending.

It's really easy to feel your emotions throughout the whole thing...and I'm really sorry that this happened to make you feel them. :(

xo
Lain

Forgot my password... So Here I am anonymous or not so annoymous. whatever. You're very good at expressing your feelings through words. Sometimes that is hard to achieve, but somehow you manage to accomplish it. I can feel and understand the emotion behind this piece. It's hard to ignore. I have to say there are little to no grammar or spelling errors. Though you may have left out a word in Line 9... Other than. Brilliant piece.