Good chapter. I like this story. I don't see any typos and the plot is original. Nice chapter!

Oh my God. Poor Jacinda. (:

And for a moment there, I thought Marvin liked her. Guess I was wrong, though...I mean, he took the cheerleader's number...

But, seriously. If Jacinda was real we'd so be best friends. xD

I wonder how she felt when she was referred to as a possesion. Hehe.

And btw, I looked up the name 'Jacinda', and it means Hyacinth. A kind of flower, I'm guessing... (:

i can't wait to see how this story turns out, so update soon, please!

This new chapter was quite interesting. Haha.

The whole plastic cup thing was something I'd do as well.

I was just wondering, is the Nile River in Africa or Egypt? Lol. Haha.

Anyway great chapter. ;)

P.S. you spelled my username wrong. you said PainSunshine. haha. That's funny. PainSunshine. Lmao. :)

wow fun twist but you HAVE to explain why its Jay that has to get married to Taylor and not Jessica.

Wonderful! :)

I hope you continue this story.

Haha, I love cliche arranged marriage stories. This is off to an interesting start. Definitley gonna keep an eye out for updates.

And Jacinda is suck a pretty name. What does it mean? I've never heard it before. XD

I LOVED this! It has the potential to be a very popular story on Fictionpress, so keep the chapters coming! You did a great job with humor, but try not to fall into the cliché storyline later in the story, because you already dissed it in this chapter. It wouldn't really fit into the story if they ended up falling in love, then having a fight and then falling in love again. But I'll definitely still read this story if you do use that cliché. Heck, I use it in my stories. Haha. GREAT job and I've added you to my favorite authors and favorite stories list! WOOT WOOT!

It's cute. I think the plot is original and interesting.:)

Very nice. Very nice. Now go review mine woman! lol. She's going to get with Tyler! She's going to get with Tyler! *Ada does happy dance*

-pyro