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| JordiiGirl 2008-07-14 ch 1,  | abuseI like the rhythm and pacing of this, there's a good amount of suspense to it. |
| Katsaya 2008-06-27 ch 1, | abuseI like this, it makes your heart beat and the rhyming is great:) |
| East-0f-Eden 2008-06-25 ch 1, | abuseI really don't get how this is humor. But I do think it's really descriptive! |
| S. M. Saves 2008-06-25 ch 1, | abuseThe rhythm of the piece carries like a frantic heartbeat. Very nice. |