Yay America. I pray for out soldiers every night and thank God that there are men and woman willing to put their lives on the line for our country. I can't believe there are people who don't respect them and make fun of them, "If you can't stand behind out troops, feel free to stand in front of them."

Nice! I love the imagery. Good use of the red, white and blue theme. It's a very good dedication.

Stupid wars. There's always SOMETHING to fight about. Why can't everyone just go, "That's okay; let's compromise without fighting" and share a cookie or something? *is sounding childish but doesn't care much* If only it was as simple as that...

I cried! war is just a horrible thing, this a very nice poem to everybody who lost something 'cause of war.

Very uplifting piece, nice to see something positive about this subject.

Well written piece. I love the sentiment behind it. Nice work.

~Twilight Starr~

A worthy cause to write for. They do indeed deserve all the thanks in the world. Thank you for this piece. My biggest advice for you would be either to shorten your piece or to break up some of the lines. It makes the writing more concise and improves flow.