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| That Girl in the Corner 2008-09-04 ch 1, | abuseStupid wars. There's always SOMETHING to fight about. Why can't everyone just go, "That's okay; let's compromise without fighting" and share a cookie or something? *is sounding childish but doesn't care much* If only it was as simple as that... |
| kloun doll 2008-06-28 ch 1, | abuseI cried! war is just a horrible thing, this a very nice poem to everybody who lost something 'cause of war. |
| simpleplan13 2008-06-27 ch 1, | abuseVery uplifting piece, nice to see something positive about this subject. |
| Twilight Starr 2008-06-26 ch 1, | abuseWell written piece. I love the sentiment behind it. Nice work. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| thegreatfool 2008-06-25 ch 1, | abuseA worthy cause to write for. They do indeed deserve all the thanks in the world. Thank you for this piece. My biggest advice for you would be either to shorten your piece or to break up some of the lines. It makes the writing more concise and improves flow. |