hey :) I am so sorry i havent stayed in touch with you for so long! i've been at college doin my AS exams and editing my other story 'Alisha'. Forgive me? lol

How r u? Hope everythings gd. r u going anywhr this summer? if so, have fun. if not... still, have fun!

I love the rhyming in this poem, and even though i cant relate, i get where ur coming from. I especially love the repetition of the verse in italics :)

Tc,
~mez~

Nice. I think that its good that she loves him, and apparently he desires her, but she doesnt want him to change for her. It reminds me of a song 'Teardrops on My Guitar' by Taylor Swift. Except, almost like remixed, because he loves her too, and in the other song the guy was totally oblivious to her love.
Best,
Irina

I like the idea that if he cheated with you he wouldn't be the man you love, but there were some parts it seemed he was attracted to you but couldnt act on it and then you say "he'll never love you" which seemed contradictory, though maybe I'm missing something. Really nice repetition and great chorus.

Interesting concept and very well expressed.