Very nice && beautiful poem.

I meant to review this one a while ago! I guess I lost track of time or something. Lol, but not enough to forget about it. I really liked this poem. I loved how you wrote it and I enjoyed the different take on writing. It was refreshing. This is def. one of my favorites!! I just can't say enough about it. Awesome job. And keep writing!

"Let them tears fall like rain." That's a great line. I cry like that sometimes. Awesome job!