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| bijake1901 2008-07-15 ch 1,  | abuseshort and sweet btw u write peoms alot! |
| realdreamer 2008-06-25 ch 1, | abusevery good poem. i think the same way about a girl :) |
| call me ish 2008-06-25 ch 1, | abusei like it and its simplicity. with the lack of punctuation though, right after "nothingness".. was that intentional? if there is indeed supposed to be a period there, it would be a brilliant ending and i suggest going back and putting it there as it completely changes how those last two lines are read and really, the entire meaning of the poem to something edgy and brill. |