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| faerie-gumdrops 2008-06-27 ch 1,  | abuseThis is really cool; I'd really like to see it continued if you decide to. I love the perspective here and the way that the narrator obviously wants them to open up. 'Who you really are is revealed when you’re in love' I really liked this part. Some really great points were raised in this, and I especially love the last paragraph. Very well written too (my complete lack of helpfulness is only due to the way that I can't find anything wrong with this!) Good job! |