this was amazingly funny, and i just LOVED Dayne. usually i find people make their gay's overly sensitive about their orientation, but Dayne's totally into it =3. And his personality was awesome, in my opinion, totally hilarious. if only i knew someone like that in real life, they'd total be my best friend ^^. This story is SO going in my faves!

With luv, Neo

I LOVE this. I don't even know what else to say... I just freaking LOVE this.

that was absolutely fantasical. It was so great... i love you for making this oneshot.

Awesome one-shot. I really liked Kasper..kind of ironic yet funny with a lovely yaoi twist.. Though it'd be interesting to see their continued relationship...if only...

that was really hot. cute, too. the twins (and dayne) sound adorable. =D

i especially like all the parts involving his violent sister. she makes me laugh.

'I felt his lips ghost over my cheek'

LOL! Unintended pun?

Good story but far too much is left unexplained.

AMAZING THIS STORY IS SO HOT AND COOL!

This was awesome to read. Totally hilarious. I love it. Cute, sweet, funny, and hot. What more could you want in a story? LOL. Any chance at a sequel? JK. Much love!

Omg, OMG, I finished it!! I've been reading it ALL DAY (between breaks). And OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG. I can't believe you wrote that for me! And and and, Dayle (sounds a lot like Doug/Vayle...? ^o)) is SO cute!! He reminds me of Lani!! E! I love it when stuff like that happens!

And and and I saw all the little things that seemed to be in reference to me! Like...the Dust Bunnies at the beginning!! I thought that was a sly reference to mee! And the blue mascara (my life) xD!!

I LOVE YOU EFFAY! Even though that took me like FOREVER to read, it was deffo worth it!

I would put quotes in...but there were so many that this review would never end! So I'll just say that I loved it again!

And and and, THE LUSTY LEMONY/LIMEYNESS!! I LOVED IT! Omgomg, I want Kasper so bad! And I'm sure I mentioned Caspar the ghost to you at some point xD.

But when I first read through the sex I was like...:O:O:O:O!! EFFAY WROTE THAT!? OMFG!! I never would have expected it of you babe!!

And! I've realised who Kaspar reminds me of a little...'Jesse' from the 'Medium' (I think they were called) books by Meg Cabot! Shh, I don't read girly books...xD.

BUT YEAH! I would say more, but I need to get a move on with 'Hot Trash' so that I can get chapter 7 up sometime (hopefully) this weekend!! But I'll probably fail miserably...

And and and just so you know, I'm going to RESTRAIN myself from reading Garen and Cadyn's story RIGHT NOW. Because otherwise I'll have to go the entire summer without having anything from you to read!! So...I guess, I'll try and hold out until Monday *bites lip*. So hard to resist...

And yeah! I loved that song 'Letze Minute'!! 'Twas awesome!!

But meh, I'm going to go respond (in brief) to your email now!