I'm later in reviewing this than many, but damn, this was the most epic story I've ever read on FP. I'm really glad I read F&L from when it was a school gang story to the brilliant action-romance drama that it evolved to.

Too many mind blowing revelations to comment on (Poor Daisuke, seriously. He was probably the most misunderstood in this whole series), although I do want to bring up an error in the chapters.


'His hand made its way to my womb. I saw a smile form on his lips, “Don’t overdo things from now on, okay? You have to take care of her…”

“He’s a ‘he’,” I pressed down his nose playfully with my finger.'


In Chapter 59 Power of Trust, Aya told Kosuke that her child was a boy, but in the last chapter,

'“Hehe… No… She’s a girl,” I replied, breaking from the embrace. “Oh! There she is!”'

Aya told Crosse that her child was female.

So, is it a guy or a girl?

It's only a minor thing I'm picking at, doesn't hide the fact that F&L was just made of win. Congrats on completing it, you did a fantastic job.

Nanao

No words can explain how amazing this story is, and so i take my hat off to you,

Hiro,

i will always remember this story forever.

OMG...is it really over?OHH WOW I cant believe its over.
I must say...its been an amazing journey. I have to say this...it amazes me how the story started and how so much happend, no one could have guessed any of it.
The story has kept my attention all the way through...the twists and turns were unpredictable till the end.
Iam glad you posted up last 6 chapters together.
The characters, setting, plot, climaxes...were great. Filled with so many emotions...everything came together at the end smoothly.
You are truly an amazing writer.
I am sure everyone would love it, if this could be published as a book or even a movie.THAT would be great.

but nonetheless...GREAT WORK!fist and lipsticks would ROCK 4ever!

PEACE:)

That. Was. AMAZING.

Incredible. Thank you for sharing your story! It is a extremely well written piece of work that I LOVE. I have been reading for a long time, and I completely love it.

Thankyou!

WOW! atlast, the story was finished. It's great and It's really really good. I'm very glad that the story ended wonderfully but I think there are some grammatical errors on the epilouge but it's still great.

First of all, I want to applaud you for the complex plot. It really boggles my mind and there are so many characters I simply can't remember them all. ._. But I like how you address every issue and how everything ties together at the end. You covered every loophole possible and I think that's VERY VERY impressive because in stories, there are always loopholes that the authors don't address and it makes the story less good. But F & L deserve 10/10. (:

No offence meant but, I didn't particularly like how you wrote things in Ayane's POV, but went on to talk about the other characters' situation in a third person's POV. It's kind of illogical because technically, the first person wouldn't know what was going on with the rest. But that's just my two cents' worth and your writing skills more than make up for that bit.

You're a very good writer and I hope to read more stories from you! :D

OMGEE. YOU SO FUCKING RULE.

So Hiro, the real victim indeed is Daisuke, right?

Oh, I really pity him now!
I never thought, he’d sacrifice himself too much!!
at first i really thought that he was the biggest rival in this story!

And by the way, back in Book 1.
When the Spectra is looking for Ayane and when Ayane is announcing who really she is, that was the REAL Daisuke that rushed beside Kosuke, right?


And Daisuke really is an attorney, right?
Hahaha!


Lots of question forming in my mind now!


It just occurred to me last night when I cant sleep!!

And I really pity Kosuke, he never experienced to have a happy family. And when he saw his ONLY FAMILY PICTURE, I cried! Huhuhu!



I cant really believe that after so long, its done finally!






I want some more of this story!



Pls!

I cant believe its over! I actually feel like crying !

That was amazing!

both this and the first story were EPIC.!
yhuu deserve a cookie :) hehehe

awwh she got her star back!

and holy cow, this was such a story with twists and pows and woshas lmfaoo LOVED IT ^.^

ahh!! its actually finished the story is all over god!! that was a good story! you really did a great job on it!

oH my GOSH.
i'll surely miss reading FISTS AND LIPSTICKS.

joB well done HIRO.
i was crying in the last parts...
*sobs*

TWO THUMPS UP.
b(^^.)d

LOVE IT SO MUCH.

*clapping*
:))

hey hey!
so i read f & l 1 when it first came out and i've been following each update. I'm one of those silent readers so i never reviewed but i just had to review at the end! you are an awesome writer and i can't think of anyone who could have pulled of such an amazing story! you should get it published!anyways best of luck on all your future stories :)

7 chapters in a day. the plot is so unexpected. but i m glad tat everyone has a happy ending