WHY DO THIS TO ME?
I go away for TWO WEEKS AND I COME HOME TO 90 EMAILS!
WO! A mention . . .
ok I need to read vk IV (after you have been going on about it for so long), then wolf tales . . . god I hate jet lag . . .
oh and instead of writing angel you put angle up there dear . . .

ok no offense but this story kinda sounds like a filler. also, it's incredibly horrible that you don't show the daughter at her teen years. you really should show us that before you go onto the next story. and another thing the story tital is kinda bad considering that there isn't really any danger. sorry. =) I just thought that I would point those things out. then the next item on my list, I FREAKING LOVE YOU STORY, I LOVE YOUR SIERIES AND I LOVE YOUR WRIGHTING. ok and also one thing on a completely different story. Breaking dawn is the best book ever. I love bella's ability, and I also love the ending, it is like the best thing that could happen.

this was great. keep up the good work and writing.

Aw Thats sad!! I think you need to make it clearer how tightly she is bound to her child . . . more description dear . . .
Inspiration! O0O0OH!! Erm listen to some music that could be loosley related . . . hey it works for me . .

oh my god is there a better man than magnus and I'm so freakin' glad that she found someone just as excited about her baby as her. I just loved how he looked at her after she squealed. lol honestly I hope I meet a man like magnus. yes I am still drooling over magnus, but who can stand not to. he is so dang gentlmanly. :) *squeal* lol

AW!
Oh 1 grammar thing . . . can't remember what it was . . . oh and 'baby's womb'? Does that make sense?

i loved this chapter. keep up the excellent work and writing. can't wait for more. i am glad that i inspired you for a chapter.

ok really short and not much to say to it. I can't wait till four months pass.

YAY! I GOT MENTIONED!
Hm nice fluff . . . . . oh in the last paragraph you put for instead of four . . .
oh and btw it's Tily Everly, with one 'l'
=D

this was good. keep up the good work and writing. can't wait for more.

ok that was better. great speach. do you mind if I use that for when I tell my husband that i'm pregnant if I ever do become pregnant? also I don't think that there will ever be a better guy than magnus. he is such and angle. how Ironic is that?!?

ok really short and really nothing to say and I was wondering why we don't hear about the testing.

YAY! Your back! WO!
Great chapter . . . I laughed so much when the words pregant vampire . . . HA! Yes made me laugh . . .
Love the story . . . keep writing dear . . .

this was excellent. keep up the good work and writing. i loved the speach elizabeth gave magnus. i hope to read what she is like and what they go through before the child is born.

I agree with your friend that it was kinda creepy but that was just because I knew they would end up having sex. but I really like how you didn't write specifically that they were going to have sex. which is really good on your part. :) great story.