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| Acantha Alleyoope 2008-07-28 ch 2,  | abuseshort. you should probably read over a couple more times before you post, there's a lot of spelling and grammar mistakes. like tense errors. |
| Acantha Alleyoope 2008-07-28 ch 1, | abusenew hymen city, haha. you know after that very irresistible summary, i was expecting to be let down. it's funny, and i look forward to updates. |
| crecentmoon89 2008-07-12 ch 1, | abuseyou are such a dork... this is lisa and when are you going to update?!? DO IT! NOW! AND SHUT THE FREEKING MUSIC OFF! (psst...the readers can hear it.) |
| Roselyn Flores 2008-06-26 ch 2, | abuseThis is really good! I really like it so far and hope you update soon! |
| Skyway Avenue 2008-06-26 ch 1, | abuseLots of mistakes... It's very distracting, maybe you should consider getting a beta reader. |
| This chick needs a life x3 2008-06-26 ch 2, | abuseO.m.g Need more! I love it! |
| the ladies of valor 2008-06-26 ch 2, | abuseLOL! That was funny! |