this is really good. and creepy.

It's a good story. You did really good.

It’s sad that these things happen… how could someone ever be that sick? Anyway well written and very heart felt.

Whoa.. this is just.. spooky. It's kind of gothic but not. I'm scarred.

But well done XD

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Wow. Strange...

*shivers* this is pretty awesome. I always wanted to do a poem like this.

And thank you so much for your review. I appreciate it :)

Thank you for mentioning me.

I really like it. I think the story was interesting and the way you chose to describe it was really creative. All your descriptions were well done and flowed well into each other.

Wow, you are really brutal with the images here, you don't shy away. As a result, a very gripping poem! Good work.

Wow. This is definitely creepy, haunting, and a little morbid, but you know what? I liked it. It's excellent! :)

I really liked this poem. You did a really good job on this.