This story is so good! I feel like I can identify with aspects of each of your characters and you have made me truly invest in each of them. I'm totally falling in love with Tully (and Cornell! I'm college searching and Cornell just skyrocketed to the top 3 of my list!). How often do you update? I'm dying to see what happens next, so update soon.

P.S. Your penname is AWESOME!

Hey, I just found your story and I must say, it's really entertaining - mostly because I go to Cornell too and it's probably the first time I've been able to fully picture a scene and know it's exactly what the author had in mind. I don't know if it's just me, but everything's super specific and, for some reason, I get the feeling that it would be better if you didn't use Cornell as a backdrop. A lot of the things you write are just fillers - even within the chapters that are "plot-fused". You should remove all descriptions of Lynah Rink, remove the Footbridge names, the "HumEcie slope" (although that hill does KILL!), etc., because it slows down the story and bogs it down with far too much detail.

Anyway, this chapter was super cute - especially since Funk & Disorderly was featured in it. I live with the singer/guitarist of that [defunct] band. Did you see them play last week at The Nines too?

Great story! It actually made me laugh aloud (which is much less common than the popular usage of "lol" would imply). I love the quirkiness of the characters, and, though I don't usually like shifts in perspective, I appreciated the chance to see Tully's side of it in chapter 18. Also, the specific location references make me very happy, since I go to college just outside of Ithaca (and had excited flailings at the mention of Taste of Thai, one of my favorite restaurants on the Commons).
Keep up the awesome work, and I look forward to the next chapter!

omg lol i love NCIS im always watchig the marathons, great story by the way :)

This was a really cute chapter, I really enjoyed it. I like that you told something from Tully's POV, I think it worked well. Anyway, I'm loving the story. Update soon! I want to see how this all turns out!

tully

Gosh, I know it's been a while, but I'm in love with this so I think you should update it... I'll love you FOREVER

Just started reading :) i love it!

My favourite line: "What the ** is a fairy cake?"

This story is simply amazing.
Six Weeks With Satan and this one are probably my two favourite pieces of writing on Fictionpress.
So please, update soon. (:

it was really good! i dont think anybodys great at speaking 'guy' not even guys. lol. but anyway, love it and update soon!

don't worry too much over it. you "guy" speak is pretty accurate...well as accurate as i can tell. i've never been inside a guy's head before.
great job on the chapter. it's refreshing to get a little bit of the story from tully's pov
keep up the good work.
breakfast calls.
-ndt

Heya :)

I liked reading Tully's POV, it gives the story a new sort of dimension. You write his POV well.

You have a great story going on here. Hope you'll update soon.

Duude Flippin Fantastic!
Soo i love it, its brilliant. Oh gosh i cant wait till the next update!

aw! tullys so cute! :D

Ah!! Way to leave it :P

Good story so far! Tully is so sweet...!