-grinning- I like this escape better.

:) CD

she's going to start a new life. Sounds like Princess Jasmine from Aladdin. I can't wait to see who she meets along the way of her journey. she'll have a hard time staying hidden from the palace guards. up date soon. ^_^

Good work there, again. I can see a very huge improvement as compared with your other work. It's just getting better and better, and I really like your style of writing!

[“Get down from there!” shrieked a very Annabel-like voice. Kuja cursed under her breath when she saw the telltale blonde hair. Caught.]

Wow, I like how you structure/construct this sentence. Really nice.

Anyway, happy writing. :P

L~

I love the finished product! :D :) The way you paralleled the attitudes each race had towards the other- - -and that you showed both sides of the issue. It also introduces us to both races without info-dumping- - -nice touch! :) I look forward to more! :)

(BTW, I want to warn you right now that my reviewing of this story might be rather sporadic- - -my schedule's been kind of crazy and been horrible about actually reviewing rather than just reading. ^^')

~Elicael, Fire Sarien~

-applause- I like how you used "we" for what would become the dominant race, and to differentiate the two... -thumbsup- nice!

:DCD

Hmm. Not exactly sure what's going to happen, but I like it so far. I'm not going to ruin it for myself by reading the original version of the story, especially if you think this one is better. :)