Beautiful poem. Great job at describing the "enigma boy" and her feelings of safety. Nice work.

~Twilight Starr~

This was a very interesting and strange poem. Very different to say the least, but I like it. As I read through I felt the chaos and confusion. I don’t know if that's what you were trying to get across but that’s what I felt. Now don’t get mad but I think that your stanzas could be a little neater unless you were going for the wave affect which is fine. All in all I thought it was a fantastic poem.

Selverwulf
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