The poem seemed realistic as I was reading. It was almost like I was there watching the whole tale unfold at the bus stop. It had the right amount of imagery and description, it only helped make it more realistic read. For this poem I don’t think that rhyming was really need and I enjoyed reading this poem. Keep up the good work, hon.

Selverwulf ;)
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I like the title. Great job on telling a tale through poetry. Nice work.

~Twilight Starr~

wonderful imagery

Very short, but very sweet. The message is clearly conveyed and well-written. I like this a lot.