I'm quite in love with this story. Pleas continue!. :)

This is a really good story. Great writing, and I'm already loving Jude, though I'm not sure why - maybe it's just the way Delilah thinks about him. I'm so intrigued by this, I wonder what's happened to Jude! Gasp! I'm favouriting and alerting. :D On with the next chapter...

This is great! Please continue?
I really like your cynical humour and your style is to-the point.
You definately deserve heaps more reviews.

This is so full of epic cuteness. :) Some of my favorite lines:

It was possible that I was overreacting.

“Do you have Jude?”

I forget that he is still the kid who pulled my hair in second grade and third grade….and eighth grade.

I immediately scowled, remembering my superhero mission to find my ally Negative Nathan and convince him to join me in the quest to find Jude the Misplaced Gentleman. “So you don’t have Jude?”

“No Delilah, he’s under the blanket. Join us won’t you?”

The voice in them is just so awesomely zany.

I wish I had the energy to review more fully, but I'll be back. :) Keep up the awesome work. ^.^

Wow. This is really good! I just discovered your story today and am hooked! Can't wait for more! :)

Great story. Well written, intriguing, and I hope you update soon because this is really amazing.

Very interesting... Yes. Very interesting.


I liked it.

"Yuppie", heh heh heh was that ever a flashback.

Like you said this is very fast paced, but very enjoyable. Probably not for readers who don't want to be absorbed in a plotline though...See Jude Run isn't the sort of story you can just glance over and write some hacked review for. Either you read it or you don't. Be cautious of this and remember it might not garner this particular story a lot of acknowledgement (one gets worn out reading so much on a glowy computer monitor, so there isn't much energy left for reviewing) (sounds like an excuse but believe me, it's a tried and true theory).

I repeat: take your time. Let the readers digest the story before you force more down their throats...heh heh but don't make the same mistakes I have and update so few and far between that people forget about you ;). Keep it up.

btw, Delilah is my favorite character. I love her way of narration.

It's been a while since I've found something good to add. Typos don't seem to be your thing, and neither does passive writing...See Jude Run is very good but vague so far as to who everyone really is. An intriguing vague.

I suggest that you take your time finishing the story, I would hate to see such a good beginning ruined by some rushed ending.

8/10

...Hm!

8/10

OMG i love this story.
you really know how to 'end' a section. I want too keep reading!

I also absolutely love the characters so far and can not wait to find out more about Jude and the rest of his strange companions.

it sounds like you have some very interesing characters going here.
i would continue reading it.

The biggest drawback of Fictionpress allowing ANYONE to post stories is that the quality is not always the best. This is not one of those cases. This is well-written and very interesting. I can't wait to read the next chapter!