Ohai plz update ty

come on update already

awesome story! i reli like it! cnt w8 2 find out wat happen next 2 dese characters!
good luck writing!

update i lvoe wat u go so far

i want more
that sounds whiney :P
but i really like the story :D

It seems a bit ostentatious at times and some of the wording (stylistically) feels out of place from the more modern tone of the whole story. I've read a lot of vampire stories, so I know the attraction of flowing prose, but there is no paragraph structure whatsoever to compliment this. I also know what to expect from most plots and what is considered a cliche. However, since this story is only in its third chapter, I'm sure it will pick up a bit and hopefully there will be more building of the characters in the chapters to come. All in all, I did enjoy it thus far.

cool story ;] even though the story has just began, i can tell that this will be an awesome story =] update soon!

that was very good story.
um...can you tell me when the next chapter comes out.

Damn the guy is indestructible!

O man I can't imagine the pain! Gah!

She was so close to getting away too!

Great chap!

Well maybe not all vampires deserve to die, but Vic got what was coming to him.

Good chap!

Love it!

You have to keep writing. I was just starting to get really interested in the plot and then there was no more. It's really good and I can't wait to read more. Keep Going!

this is a really good story i like it i was wondering if there were going to be more chapters to this great story. your a really great author who wrote this great story.

This story has a lot of potential, I hope you havent given up on it just yet!
I really enjoyed what you have got so far!
Please update soon! (:

Great, more please