i liked the once for change, twice for miracles

i like your message.

you have a few weak lines, like "let them just deal" which sounds like a bit of a cop out and "cause whomever can't take it needs to go quake it." don't sell yourself short for the sake of a rhyme.

add some stronger lines and you've got yourself a nice poem.

keep writing :]

This is shy of becoming a strong piece. I love the lines "'cause we don't do these things twice", and "one for change, twice for miracles". Keep it up.

I like the message. The only line I would consider fixing or revising is "Needs to go quake it." The word 'quake' just seems like the wrong word, but that's just my opinion lol.