|Reviews for I'll Be|
| Quitisential Bee 6/27/08 . chapter 1
I'll be waiting in your driveway. XD sorry, couldn't resist.
ON A SERIOUS NOTE. If you go into love thinking its lame, if you feel some form of reluctance, some need to justify yourself...you'll loose. Go in confident. You are there for her, you are her's. (I am a guy, switch the gender at will) Life is too wonderful and short to spend time showing others that you're 'not lame'. Live with no dead time. I like this one, because I can understand it. Lame is relative, don't abuse that word. This isn't lame. This is good.
Keep it up.
| Random-Idiocity 6/26/08 . chapter 1
Not lame. We all have poems like these, and what we think is different from what others do. I like the message though. That there is someone who cares enough for the person they love, that when they get hurt in a relationship with who they think is their true love ends in tragedy. Not knowing their is still someone waiting for them to make them happy. Wonderful job. Keep it Up!